I think the pictures are great. I'm very interested in your hardware--telescope or not, solar filter (looks like "yes"), and camera settings. I had a similar view through my Meade LX200 with solar filter, but no camera attachment, so my memory will have to serve....
In Tulsa we had a stratus/stratocumulus deck with some very brief breaks that occasionally afforded enough clarity to see the large sunspot visible in your pictures. Also, we expected at most 74% coverage at the peak of the eclipse. A recipe for a mediocre day.
But, the "cloudy"-filtering did make it possible to use my Z6. Here's a technically hideous picture, from an astronomical point of view, but...from an artistic point of view? that is up to the individual.
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